Dear all,
Schnark.home.blog has become somewhat congested of late,
As my waffle has proliferated,
And I fear that I waste the time
Of my very few, much valued readers.
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I read through again and again,
Desperate to thin out the dross.
But I can’t seem to manage,
I cannot see the wheat
For the grass.
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Perhaps I see relevance
Where there is none,
And perhaps I’d do better
To just breath
Deeply.
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Yes, Deeply.
Definitely deeply.
I always want to go deep
In all things,
Perhaps too deep.
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I speak in earn’st.
There was once an editor,
Part time perhaps.
She held other positions too,
Some full time,
And the vacancy of which I tell
Is only for this one.
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It can be paid
In kind,
Or in cash,
And it will be a service
To me, and to others.
I look forward to welcoming you to the team.
https://prowritingaid.com/grammar-checker The best editor is yourself. You know best what you mean to say.
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Thank you,
But my blog has become very personal, and I get quite emotional, and feedback has been very thin of late.
Sometimes I think crying in public is ok, but there has to be a limit.
Best wishes to you, keep calling it how is!
S.
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If it wasn’t personal we wouldn’t do it. We are awake while others sleep. Keep on !
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Oh man, good luck with that, S. Personally, I’m not sure you should try to “edit” yourself. I think emotions are good. But that’s me. As for crying–I definitely do that everywhere, lol. Public included, behind my sunglasses. 🙂
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Thank you,
Interesting, same advice twice over. But I think we all need to edit ourselves, not every thought needs uttering, not every event needs broadcasting. I guess I’m looking for a secondary check, and I guess a harsher advice might be grow up, take responsibility for your own shit.
But thanks for seeing that I am serious.
And on sunnies, I hope I don’t offend, but I find them really difficult, I find it hard to warm to people if I don’t see their eyes, which might be the point, maybe you don’t want people warming too much, and maybe that doesn’t count then as public?
Best wishes, hoping you have more cause to laugh than cry.
S.
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